2006-05-14 RiddleRose: ooh, nice. i think you want "woken" not "waken" in the last paragraph... 2006-05-15 Anninja: Thanks. Tell me if you want something else changed that sounds weird. English is not my native language ^ยท^ 2007-01-27 RiddleRose: really? i never would have guessed! i know so many native-born speakers whose grammar and spelling are so much worse than yours... XD 2007-02-02 Anninja: Thanks *blushes*[Anninja]: 428.The dreamer
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Suddenly a sound distracted her attention, erasing completely her will to suppress fear. A tick under her palm. Then again. The watch was beating in one rhythm with her heart. Faster, faster, getting off-beat... Silence suddenly wasn't dank anymore, didn't seem thick enough to cover the sound of watch ticking, as clear as pebbles falling on glass.
-What are you doing here so early?
That cold voice... Arya couldn't bring herself to turn around and look mister Devel in the eyes. Her only wish was to run, hide somewhere and never come out so that nothing and no one would be able to hurt her.
-Say "good morning"!
Words crashed the silence like distant thunder. The girl, silent and not turning around, stretched backwards her arm with the letter in it. The man took a step towards her, bowed down... She couldn't bear it. Arya dropped the letter and ran. In the trees- a root, branch, a spider web, branch again... Soon it was just a blur. The girl squeezed her eyes shut and dashed forwards in blind fear. The ground swaying, heartbeat drumming in her ears... She couldn't tell when the fall had started. Butterflies crowded her stomach and heart didn't show any signs of working- just for one moment. Falling stopped as suddenly as it had begun. Arya had woken up. All she could feel in the air was only the scent of dank silence and unsolvable mystery that early hours of the morning so often possess.